Thankfully I've gotten a lot of my old subscribers back (only carissa
because I told her to read it... :(). Regardless, I'll do what I can to
let people know I'm writing again. In the meantime, here's the first three pages of my book.
Tell me what you think, don't hold back!
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The ground began shaking, a violent seizure that disoriented
Karaj. He
watched as a few of his men fell to their knees in fear, beseeching Almighty Jiddar.
Most of the soldiers stayed on their feet, legs spread wide, arms outstretched;
attempting to keep their balance as the land continued to spasm.
Karaj’s
stallion reared in fear, and nearly threw him to the ground. A few soft spoken
words quieted the frightened mount, though fear still danced in his eyes.
Karaj pulled his spyglass
from his belt, and quickly looked towards Mount Shivaz.
As his eyes fell upon the mountain, a grayish-black cloud erupted forth from
its peak. Karaj
lowered the looking glass, watching as the ash began to cover the sky in all
directions, spreading from horizon to horizon. Day turned to night as the smoke
swallowed the sun, blotting out its very existence.
Before the land had fully stopped shaking another tremor,
smaller than the first, rippled through the ground, and at that moment the top
half of Mount Shivaz exploded outwards. The detonation
sent portions of the mountain spiraling outwards. A red, fiery liquid bubbled
forth from the mountain’s peak, and began a swift descent to the valley floor.
Ignoring the ringing sound that filled his ears, Karaj once again raised
the spyglass to his eyes. He watched as the blazing liquid leaked down the
mountain’s side like hundreds of blood filled rivers. The lava bursting from
the mountain reminded Karaj
of the famed fountains of Dubar, as the droplets cascaded into the air.
Karaj
moved the spyglass downwards so that he was looking at the foot of the mountain,
and that which awaited the volcanoes wrath.
Ketesh was one of the largest cities in Dalhar, and home to hundreds
of thousands. Ketesh was the only city in Dalhar that offered, as they called
it, “religious freedom”. Instead of only following the teachings of the (book
here) as laid down by Jiddar, they allowed the worship of all the gods. Such
heresy could not go unpunished.
The wicked citizens of Ketesh had been warned that they must
turn away from their sins and worship the One true God, Jiddar. If they failed
in doing so, they would be utterly wiped from the face of the earth.
Now the city was covered in ash, and the river of fire was
nearing the city walls, they had refused to obey. Thousands would die in a
matter of minutes, their deaths acting as a herald to the world. Karaj considered it
harsh, for not all the people of Ketesh deserved such a fate. But the Holy Zahid
had spoken, and his was the Word of God. Who was Karaj to question the Almighty?
Karaj
was beginning to worry though. Zahid had gone himself to punish the city, and
he had not been seen for hours. Could the Son of God have been killed by the
explosion? Zahid was God, but perhaps a God made flesh could suffer the same
fate as any mortal.
Besides, thought Karaj, no man could control a volcano and hope to
live! I pleaded with him not to go. He should have sent one of the High Priests;
they were more than willing to sacrifice themselves. Zahid had only been among
us for three years, his work here is surely not complete!
Karaj
glanced around at his men, noticing that many appeared to be having the same
thoughts as himself. Some of the men were still on their knees, but they were
no longer praying for deliverance, rather they were praising the name of Zahid.
I shouldn’t be having
these doubts, he is the Son of God. He will return.
Karaj
turned his gaze back towards the inferno, once again lifting the spyglass to
his eye. If there was something to see, Karaj
would find it. The mountain was still spewing forth lava, adding to the sea of
fire that had pooled at Ketesh’s walls. It wouldn’t be long before the city was
annihilated.
Scanning the area around Mount Shivaz
turned up nothing. Karaj
moved the spyglass towards the belching flames at the mountain’s peak. A ripple
of motion caught his eye, and he jerked the glass towards it. Something was
moving away from the mountain, picking up speed and moving towards the army.
As the thing neared, Karaj
could tell that it was no rock being launched from the exploding mountain, but
rather was a man. Someone had just flown out of the flames, and was coming
straight at them.
Could it be the Son?
Karaj
dismounted, and watched as the man flew in closer. Karaj began to discern individual details,
and knew that it was Zahid returned. He was clothed in a white robe, and though
he had flown through the flame and ash of a volcano, there was not a single
speck of dust nor any burn marks upon him. His jet black hair remained still,
unmoved by the currents of air he streaked past.
Zahid flew in and stopped at the army’s edge. Not a sound
was heard, nor a disruptive ripple felt as the air holding him aloft slowly
brought him to the ground and dissipated. Zahid looked towards the army with
his piercing black eyes. The weight of his gaze made one feel as if their very
soul was being measured. Every dark deed was seen, and not even the most
trivial act could go unnoticed.
“I have returned,” stated Zahid matter-of-factly, as if tens
of thousands of men hadn’t seen him fly through the fire and ash of a volcano.
Karaj
could only stare at the Son in awe, completely at a loss for how to respond. Zahid
then turned and fixed his eyes upon Karaj.
At that moment, Karaj fully understood the power
that was the Son’s to command, and for the first time ever, Karaj was afraid.
Karaj
began to panic. His throat constricted, causing his breathing to become
erratic. It was like an invisible band of air had wrapped itself around Karaj’s throat, squeezing the life from Karaj with giant-like strength. Karaj’s eyes widened,
darting too and fro, unable to focus on any one thing. He broke into a violent
sweat, the entirety of his body drenched in seconds. Karaj’s body began to shake uncontrollably; brutal
trembling that would surely cause more damage than the two earthquakes
combined. Karaj
licked his lips incessantly, attempting to wet his suddenly dry mouth.
Why am I afraid of my
own God! What is wrong with me? Strike me down, Father, before I shame myself!
As if reading his thoughts, Zahid tilted his head to one
side and frowned. The Son considered Karaj
for but an instant, and then shook his head as if making up his mind.
Zahid walked up to Karaj
and softly whispered in a voice smoother than silk, and more seductive than a
woman’s caress. “Fear not, my son. I know and understand your fears. Before you
stands the Son of Jiddar. Only a fool would not be afraid.”
Zahid slowly reached out and lightly laid his palm on Karaj’s forehead. The
touch was a strange mixture of fire and ice. It seared him to the core, and yet
rejuvenated the very essence of Karaj’s
soul. He felt a new sense of being course through his body. All the fear and
doubt within his heart melted away. He felt whole.
The Son retracted his hand, and the loss of his God’s touch
awoke Karaj
from his dark reverie.
Karaj
shook himself and turned towards the awaiting army. Karaj bellowed in a voice amplified by magic,
“All Hail, Zahid! Savior of Man! Son of God!”
Karaj
threw himself to the ground; arms outstretched, and continued the litany as
other voices joined his in praising His name. More and more picked up the cry
until all were exalting the Lord with every fiber of strength they could muster.
The sound of tens of thousands of soldiers crying out for their Savior was
enough to drown out the roar of the volcano.
It was nearly enough to drown out the hundreds of thousands
of fearful, wailing cries from the dying city of Ketesh.
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